1. I would certainly pick him, dimensionally excuse and the fact that he could certainly be a good enemy( especially since Kumi and Kasumi could be taken advantage of with the past dimension thing, you know cause of their horrible pasts)
2. yeah that sounds pretty good ( also given how most digimon adventure end up happening with the final battle taking place in the real world.)
3. I say to leave the Borg as they are, but let the tamers think there som type of digimon ( before Kumi explains that there aliens)
4. I think that would be better for the battle with Milleniumon in the Digiworld ( the whole trust between the teams needs to be established I think).
5.eh...Yeah seems kinda natural ( hard to really say)
6. Seems a bit characteristic ( since both are really bossy and tend to try and take the leadership position).
7. yeah I think it would work ( since they joke alot).
8. I don't see Yuri becoming dependent on Takoto, but it would be characteristic given Yuri's dependant personality. ( Totally see Kumi getting jealous that someone else is being depended upon, cause Kumi is pretty Tsundere, she hides her emotions and doesn't let people notice her weaknesses, and don't worry I think only me and the "Yuri" side of the fanbase think that, doesn't mean you have to).
9. That sounds hilarious, I can totally see that ( but don't forget they can't be cheery all the time, both have dark pasts ( Jeri with her mom, Kasumi with her bro) Also depending on if this is before or after Kasumi is a yellowknife and if it's after or before the D-reaper thing with Jeri, they might both be pretty broken.
10. I think that would be good for tension and trust ( it ruins both) between them, also I would suggest if this happens that Kumi should come and go into a angry mother bear sorta fit ( basically comforting Yuri, not romantically of course just friendly comforting, and telling off Takato for scaring her, then sorta being suspicious and wary of him, also should be a little more intense if you make Kumi jealous).
I suggest on a side note that Chisa and Megumi should be in there, but like worrying in the real world, then before the final battle brought up to speed and help the girls ( or not depends on if you wanna make'em both act lazy and leave it to the girls, then you would probably make them not believe the girls till the end), also you want to decide when this occurs in both the timelines cause the personalities are different depending on which time ( like with alien kumi and Kasumi, or Takato and Jeri and the D-reaper thing)
so I hope that help, and don't hesitate to ask me for help or advice, though don't expect an answer right away if it's next week or during school days. anyways nice talking to you like always and can't wait to hear about your writing ( I'll review it whenever I can), sincerely Y.A.O.S. ( heh initials).
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