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PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 5:29 am 
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Just posting to let you guys know that I will update eventuely, just taking a little brake, don't worry my lukemia(or however you spell that desease) is under controle, also if you are a reader of this story please post what you think of it, I like to get other peoples opinions on my work, I will still update if no one says anything but it helps.


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Glad to hear there'll be more! Take your time though, I'm very sorry to hear you have Leukemia, but I'm happy to hear you have it under control. I'm really enjoying it immensely, though XD The writing for the girls is very true to character, and the introduction of the borg's being more developed is quite nice as well ^^ A very good fanfic! Looking forward to more!


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Thanks, though I feel my original characters (the clones, Tatsuo, Mother) could be better, for example, I created Tatsuo to be the ultiment rival for the alien fighters, do you feel I have acomplished that?


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I think the OCs are great! Tatsuo is the perfect baddie - sadistic, nasty, clever, mean spirited, and malevolent. Mother is a great concept as both a puppet master an the locale, and the clones seem reminiscent of the original trio, though all have qualities that are unique to them ^^


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yes the clones are supposed to be like there originals, except for one trait that is stronger in them then the originals.

Yuri clone-Bravery
Kumi clone-Insecurity
Kasumi clone-Insanity

Mother is in charge and powerfull, she didnt even need to involve the alien fighters, shes just getting a sedistic pleasure out of having someone to mess with.


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PostPosted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 10:34 pm 
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Indeed ^^


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Also Tatsuo hasnt even revealed what he really looks like, but I think I've made it clear enough that he isnt human.


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I had gotten that impression, looking forward to when his form is revealed, though! :D


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Yes, also I think out of boredom I will tell of something that didnt make it into the final story every now and then, heres one.

Dark knife-A dark clone of Yellowknife that the alien fighters would need to face and would allmost kill them but they would defeate it and then face Tatsuo.
Reason for being cut-The alien fighters don't need to fight another monster before they fight Tatsuo who will be one of the most difficult battles.


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Whoa, that sounds interesting :o I can understand the motives behind it's removal, though. Still, sounds cool XD


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I would have updated by now if I werent stuck, but it will keep going soon, Tatsuo's sister needs to be defeated, then Tatsuo, then (not telling yet), then Mother.


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Heres another chapter http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/15/Consumption


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I liked the 15th , because of how insane the villian is and cause she looks really cool.

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Well heres more http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/16/Consumption it's mostly just the battle with Silk, I'm not really used to writing fight scenes so it's probably not as good as it could be, but the point is I tried my best, Marry Christmas! Unless you don't celebrate Christmas, but even then Happy Holidays to every person in the world!


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:20 pm 
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Just like to say that I have pretty much gotten the rest of the story planed out so it shouldnt take too long till I get to writting it.


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