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Author:  Dragon2911 [ Wed Jan 18, 2006 1:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Alien X, idea of a dojin or at least the main cast!

Howdy,
you might think: why is that jerk putting up a new topic instead of posting in his old? Well, just because of the fact that I'm going to create my own Alien party! Anyway, if you want I'll post the story in here, but right now you must see the cast.

The three main characters Image Yes they are boy, but who cares? Names are: Breck Millstone (red, main leading role), Keith Baken (green, he goes "nya") and Daniel Hagen (blue, callname: Hagen).

Every hero group needs enemys Image
That dude in the back is a cyborg who hates all kind of symbiotes and hybrids.
The twins named Para and Dox, and Hunter's favourite fighter Crusher.

I'm going to draw the minor charas in the next days.


Please forgive me, my english sucks today @_@

Author:  Kumi-chan [ Wed Jan 18, 2006 1:14 pm ]
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it's alright but I think your idea is highly original! I can't wait to see more of it ^^

Author:  Monami_Komai [ Thu Jan 19, 2006 3:18 am ]
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sounds neat! I hope to see more

Author:  Dreamland_Kris [ Fri Jan 20, 2006 12:42 am ]
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That sound really cool, Dragon. I can't wait to see more of it. ^^

Author:  Sai [ Sun Jan 22, 2006 3:21 am ]
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Nice idea! The characters all look very promising, especially Daniel. Can't wait to see more! ^^

Author:  Dragon2911 [ Mon Jan 23, 2006 4:42 pm ]
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Thanks for the nice comments^^

Anyway, I was doodling again:

Crusher in figthing stance:
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y273/D ... rusher.jpg

Breck on patrol (yes, he is skeptic):
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y273/D ... patrol.jpg

Hagen after catching "the troublemaker" Keith:
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y273/D ... tkeith.jpg

Breck gone wild:
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y273/D ... newild.jpg

Author:  Dreamland_Kris [ Mon Jan 23, 2006 9:20 pm ]
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Again, nice work! ^^ I like the Hagen catching Keith one. xD

Author:  Ordos [ Tue Jan 24, 2006 4:55 am ]
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Those pics are great too Dragon2911, Well Done.

Author:  Monami_Komai [ Tue Jan 24, 2006 5:45 am ]
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very awesome job :D

I especially like the last drawing with the silhouette and you see the smile and eyes o_o that's so creepy.

<3 hope to see more!

Author:  ragen45 [ Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:57 pm ]
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interesting, you should print them out and make them into a comic strip or something

Author:  Dragon2911 [ Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:46 pm ]
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I'm terribly sorry for the long awayness of myself, but I'm about to go through my exams soon, so I didn't have much time for other stuff.

Anyway, now I'm gonna post a quick story summary and little "biographys" of the main cast:


Let me start with:

Breck Millstone

He is the main character of Alien X.

He hates Aliens, he really hates 'em. But unlike Yuri, he isn't afraid of them. He was forced to join the AP from his school because no one wanted to do that kind of work (just like Yuris er... joining). He is always arguing with Keith, because of Keith' easy going lifestyle. Breck isn't very athletic but he has a strong mind and a helpfull leading personallity.

Maybe he is going to like Aliens someday?

Brecks Borg:

It's called "Ferro Blade" (Breck usually calls him "Ferro")

Unlike the Drill-clan, the Ferro Borgs have blade like tentacles.


Keith Baken

He is the one who goes "Nyaa~"

Keith likes to catch Aliens, it's like a big pet hunt. He has choosen to become an Alien fighter on his own, because he is looking for adventures and he think he'll find 'em their. He is usually hanging around with Hagen, 'cause he like his badass attitude. He is very athletic but not very smart.

Keith Borg:

It's called Rubber Borg.

The tentacles of this Alien are really stretchable.

Daniel Hagen (call name: Hagen)

The cool and silent guy.

He is the silent guy in the troop and not a friend of big words. Usually he is the first one who is ready to fight and do some major butt kickin. He joins the AP because of the oppurtonity (sp?) to kill his boredom. He is really anoyed of Breck and Keith when they are about to fight each other. He is an excellent marksman and a reliable person.

Hagens Borg

It's called Virgo Borg

The Virgo Borgs are very powerfull and able to lift a ton!

Hunter, Crusher, Para and Dox


missing data....



Minor Characters:

Peter Maicher:
He is the AP advisor. Unlike Megumi, he is not (!) a symbiote.

The Headmaster (don't have a name yet^^)
Well, the headmaster^^

Stephan:
Like Miyu, Stephan is the best friend of the main character.

...more to come...



Story: (very quick summary)

- takes place in germany in the year 2013 (one year before A9)

- a lot of strange things with Aliens occured

- We'll see how the boys bodys will change and how they become Hybrids

- more fighting and comedy

- more european Alien fighters

- in case that this thingy will run long enough, probably Military Alien Police, Alien 9 Crossover and some weird dreams ^ ^


Right now, I'm not really sure with what kind of media I should create this (fanfic? Doujin?)

Author:  Dreamland_Kris [ Tue Mar 28, 2006 3:31 am ]
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Wow, it sounds even more interesting. I can't wait to see this develope. XD

Author:  ragen45 [ Sat Apr 08, 2006 8:04 pm ]
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i came back to this from a while ago having forgot about it. This is awesome!!!! Your police should have bazookas, too.

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