Hello, new chapter http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/8/Consumption I have got some stuff planed for the next few chapters that might suprise you.

I thought the clones would be totally evil, but instead they seem just as frightened of mother as everyone else. I don’t know if you planned it that way, but I thought the Yuri at the beginning was the original Yuri at first. I like that clone Yuri’s ‘house’ looks like her normal bedroom but then ends in a cave.

Yes I did want it to seem like it was the original Yuri only for it to be revealed to be the clone, not all of them are afraid of Mother, Kasumi's clone is not afraid of Mother but she has other issues as shown in that chapter, also Mother is capitilized becouse it is her name, just pointing that out.

Okay, I got it. And I did notice something funny about the Kasumi clone too. She was nice one second and then mean the next. She's kind of mood swingy like the original Kasumi, as if she's hiding other issues.

Yes, she is alittle nutty like the real Kasumi, but unlike her she dosnt have a family, it dosnt help that she has all the real Kasumi's memorys.

Hey I wonder if maybe she would think of Tatsuo as a brother.

they are both creations of Mother so that would be correct.

Oh yes I am posting so that means I have a new chapter! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/9/Consumption

This is good. Now we know what became of Kumi and Yuri's clones. Also, I thought the clone had done something to Taros for a second.

Next chapter is comming soon, it will focus on them trying to get to Mother this time, expect much psychological torture in future chapters.

Here is another chapter http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/10/Consumption

I've been extremely busy for a while now, but lately things have let up for me. So, I'm sorry that I have'nt been posting any but I recently stated reading this fanfic you're reading, and I'm quite enjoying it Keep up the good work! (by the way, I'm at chapter 5 right now, so I'm still a little behind, getting caught up :p )

Thank you, tell me what you think wan you've read all the way through.

New chapter http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/11/Consumption but I am disipointed with how qiet this forum has gotten, I thought summer would have people posting more, I would post as offen as posible if someone els would just post.

Hey there, I'm all caught up now! I'm really enjoying your fanfic, it's very exciting! I'm can only speak for myself, but I once again apologize for my absence. I promise that I will be here to leave prompt feedback and forum responses now Keep up the good work